Class Feedback

we got feed bk from the class in 5 key areas one good thing about the area and one things that needs to be improved on, this is what our group got for each of the 5 key areas


Mise en scene

• Limited, basic because its animated. titles like water splashes are cleverly done perhaps some live action needed.

camera work

• Good variety of shots
• the camera moving about is good because it makes the sea look rough
• could include some more angles.

Editing

• Quite a slow pacce
• theres a flash of carpet part of someones hand shown
• no soundtrack or a title
• lots of shadow
• nice cartoon animated idea

Sound

• no sound need to put some in

Generic Conventions

• the style of the animations match the target audience.